Evaluation of the informative speech №8


          Last week we watched the video that Dasha made. Now I will evaluate it.
1. Introduction: ( 10 points)
·        What technique(s) was used in the introduction?
·      Dasha used a rhetorical question and a story from her life as attention-getters.
·        Any link-element?
·         The link-element was that poor delivery won’t help your presentation be memorable.
·        Was the thesis statement given?
·        The main thesis statement was that everyone should try to avoid the poor delivery of the speech and use the voice properly.
·        How effective was the introduction?
·        It  was effective because Dasha was persuasive.
Very effective
10, 9, 8
Average
7, 6, 5
Not effective
4, 3, 2, 1
Max 10 pts
____10_____
2. Body:  (10 points)
·        How well structured was the information presented?
·        I think that the speech was well-structured. It is evident that Dasha planned carefully the structure of her speech
Highly organized
10, 9, 8
Some organized
7, 6, 5, 4

None
3, 2, 1
·        What organizational structure was used in the body of the speech?
·     Dasha used problem-solution pattern of organization.
·        How understandable was the information (was it clearly explained)?
·        Everything was pretty clear.
Very good
109, 8
Had some problems
7, 6, 5, 4
Had major problems
3, 2, 1
·        Quality of point-support (appropriateness, completeness, variety)
·        I reckon that the point-support that Dasha provided was appropriate, complete, various.
Lots of
109, 8
Some
     7, 6, 5, 4
Almost no
3, 2, 1
·        Use of facts, illustrations, examples, stories.
·        She used some examples.
Lots of
10, 9, 8
Some
7, 6, 5
None
4, 3, 2, 1
·        Was it coherent?
·        The speech was coherent. O liked that she used linking words and stated what she would talk about next all the time.
10  9  8  7  6  5  4  3  2  1

Max 10 pts
____8_____
3. Conclusion: (10 points)
·        What technique(s) was used in the conclusion?
·        I am afraid here was no technique in the conclusion.
·        Were all the steps followed (summary, action, emotional appeal?)
·        Yes, Dasha followed all the steps.
·        How effective was the conclusion?
Very effective
10, 9, 8
Average
7, 6, 5
Not effective
4, 3, 2, 1
Max 10 pts
_____9___
Total points:  30
Given points: 27

The strength of the speech:  good structure, use of a story as an attention-getter, coherence
The weakness of the speech:  there could be more examples

To conclude, I think Dasha’s speech was successful. It was pleasant to see how much effort she put in her work.
How do you like this  speech ?Let me know in the comments down below!

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