Evaluation OF THE INFORMATIVE SPEECH №9


  Hello! Last week we watched the zoom performance of our group mate, Marina. Now I would like to evaluate it.
1. Introduction: ( 10 points)
·        What technique(s) was used in the introduction?
    She used making a reference to the audience as an attention-getter.
·        Any link-element?
·         The link-element was that if a person can’t deliver his/her speech effectively, it may lose its interest or even importance for the audience.
·        Was the thesis statement given?
·        The main thesis statement was that vocal delivery plays a great role in speech.
·        How effective was the introduction?
·        It  was effective because Marina was persuasive.
Very effective
109, 8
Average
7, 6, 5
Not effective
4, 3, 2, 1
Max 10 pts
____10_____
2. Body:  (10 points)
·        How well structured was the information presented?
·        I reckon that the speech was well-structured.
Highly organized
10, 9, 8
Some organized
7, 6, 5, 4
None
3, 2, 1
·        What organizational structure was used in the body of the speech?
·     Marina used problem-solution pattern of organization.
·        How understandable was the information (was it clearly explained)?
·        All the information was clear.
Very good
10, 9, 8
Had some problems
7, 6, 5, 4
Had major problems
3, 2, 1
·        Quality of point-support (appropriateness, completeness, variety)
·        In my opinion, the point-support that Marina provided was appropriate, complete, various.
Lots of
109, 8
Some
     7, 6, 5, 4
Almost no
3, 2, 1
·        Use of facts, illustrations, examples, stories.
·        She used some examples.
Lots of
10, 9, 8
Some
7, 6, 5
None
4, 3, 2, 1
·        Was it coherent?
·        The speech was coherent.
10  9  8  7  6  5  4  3  2  1

Max 10 pts
____9_____
3. Conclusion: (10 points)
·        What technique(s) was used in the conclusion?
·        I think she used a proverb as a technique.
·        Were all the steps followed (summary, action, emotional appeal?)
·        Yes, all the steps were followed.
·        How effective was the conclusion?
Very effective
10, 9, 8
Average
7, 6, 5
Not effective
4, 3, 2, 1
Max 10 pts
_____9___
Total points:  30
Given points: 28

The strength of the speech:  good structure, an unusual attention-getter, coherence, good examples
The weakness of the speech:  I think the speech did not have weaknesses.

All in all, I appreciated Marina’s work! She did a great job and her speech was really interesting.
What do you think about it? Leave some comments down below!

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