The contest "Toastmasters" 2017.
In today’s post
I would like to evaluate three best performances on the 2017 World Championship
of Public Speaking. Honestly, I am thrilled to find out who was the ideal
public speakers at Toastmasters 2017 from my point of view! As usual, I want to
start with assessing speeches of all the contestants.
·
Manoj Vasudevan
№
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Max points
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Given points
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I
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Speech Content
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45
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44
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Organization (comment on effectiveness of introduction;
clarity of body, including both major divisions and support points; and
efficacy of conclusion)
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20
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20
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Support (comment on speaker's use of facts, stories,
illustrations, examples and/or logic to expand, explain, defend, inform the
audience)
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15
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15
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Cohesion (comment on the speaker's ability to unify the
speech and keep clear focus through use of transitions, summaries, and other
unifying elements)
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10
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9
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II
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Speech Delivery
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40
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37
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Vocal presentation
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20
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17
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1) volume
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2) tempo
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3) pitch
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4) emphasis
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5) clear articulation
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Physical presentation
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20
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20
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1) eye contact
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2) gesturing
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3) posture
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4) facial expression
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5) movement
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6) dress
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III
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General Effectiveness
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15
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15
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Amount of time used (8 mins)
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|||
Adherence to time requirements (comment on whether or
not the speaker made good use of time, including whether the speech was too
short or too long)
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5
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5
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Creativity (comment on art/uniqueness/individualized
nature of the speech)
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10
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10
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Total points:
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100
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96
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I liked Manoj’s performance very much, because he told
the story of his life using humor as well as wisdom. The message he wanted to
deliver to the audience’s mind was very important. I also think that we all
should learn to “pull less, bend more” in every relationship we are in. In my
opinion, he was confident while giving his speech and I loved the way he made
people laugh and repeat his words after him at the end of his presentation. It
shows his ability to control the audience, which is a sign of a real
professional.
·
Simon Bucknall

№
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Max points
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Given points
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I
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Speech Content
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45
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42
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Organization (comment on effectiveness of introduction;
clarity of body, including both major divisions and support points; and
efficacy of conclusion)
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20
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20
|
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Support (comment on speaker's use of facts, stories,
illustrations, examples and/or logic to expand, explain, defend, inform the
audience)
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15
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14
|
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Cohesion (comment on the speaker's ability to unify the
speech and keep clear focus through use of transitions, summaries, and other
unifying elements)
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10
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8
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II
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Speech Delivery
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40
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40
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Vocal presentation
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20
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20
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1) volume
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2) tempo
|
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3) pitch
|
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4) emphasis
|
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5) clear articulation
|
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Physical presentation
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20
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20
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1) eye contact
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2) gesturing
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3) posture
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4) facial expression
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5) movement
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6) dress
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III
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General Effectiveness
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15
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15
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Amount of time used (8 mins)
|
|||
Adherence to time requirements (comment on whether or
not the speaker made good use of time, including whether the speech was too
short or too long)
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5
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5
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Creativity (comment on art/uniqueness/individualized
nature of the speech)
|
10
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10
|
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Total points:
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100
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97
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Simon’s speech was really great. I suppose he has a
big experience in performing in front of a public because his skills prove
that. He managed to tell a vital moment from his life as if it was a part from
an interesting book about children. At first, I could not understand the main
idea of his performance, I did not get what he was driving at. Then it became
clear that Simon wanted to teach everyone to understand each other. Besides, it
should be mentioned that Simon has wonderful acting skills.
·
Kevin Stamper

№
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Max points
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Given points
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I
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Speech Content
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45
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42
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Organization (comment on effectiveness of introduction;
clarity of body, including both major divisions and support points; and
efficacy of conclusion)
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20
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19
|
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Support (comment on speaker's use of facts, stories,
illustrations, examples and/or logic to expand, explain, defend, inform the
audience)
|
15
|
15
|
|
Cohesion (comment on the speaker's ability to unify the
speech and keep clear focus through use of transitions, summaries, and other
unifying elements)
|
10
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8
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II
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Speech Delivery
|
40
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40
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Vocal presentation
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20
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20
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1) volume
|
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2) tempo
|
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3) pitch
|
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4) emphasis
|
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5) clear articulation
|
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Physical presentation
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20
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20
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1) eye contact
|
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2) gesturing
|
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3) posture
|
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4) facial expression
|
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5) movement
|
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6) dress
|
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III
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General Effectiveness
|
15
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15
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Amount of time used (8 mins)
|
|||
Adherence to time requirements (comment on whether or
not the speaker made good use of time, including whether the speech was too
short or too long)
|
5
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5
|
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Creativity (comment on art/uniqueness/individualized
nature of the speech)
|
10
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10
|
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Total points:
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100
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97
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It was a good performance indeed that impressed me
very much. Everything was just perfect except I could not realize at first the
cohesion between two stories he told. Obviously, Kevin won hearts of all the people
from the audience because he was very charismatic and persuasive.
Now it’s high time to give the speakers the first, the
second, the third places. I must admit that it was super hard to do it because
they all deserve to be the winners of this contest. However, I have to make a
choice anyway, so I relied mainly on my personal feelings and thoughts about
performances. I would like to rank the speakers of Toastmasters in this order:
1. Manoj
Vasudevan
2. Kevin
Stamper
3. Simon
Bucknall
Manoj Vasudevan was the real
winner of the 2017 World Championship of Public Speaking. I guess it was due to
the message he wanted to share with others and also because he was very funny.
I totally loved the way he talked, joked and connected with the audience. Kevin
took the second place in my own chart of leaders. I could not resist Kevin’s sense
of humor, smile and great public speaking skills. I think it was quite unfair
that he was not the 1st place winner. As for Simon Bucknall, I
cannot say that I gave him the third place because I liked him less than other
contestants. It means only that the topic he spoke upon was not that close to
me.
Let me explain why I
evaluated Manoj’s speech as the best after all. Now I want to start analyzing
the speech content.
The organisation of speech. Undoubtedly, the introduction was effective because
Manoj firstly drew attention of all people by standing still and looking at the
audience silently. Then he started telling a story of his life, making jokes
about and more importantly, he asked a rhetorical question that was also sort
of an attention-getter. All the information he told was clear, the whole speech
was well-structured. Personally, I also think that it is vital to respect
others and be ready to make concessions in difficult situations or disputes.
When everyone treats each other courteously, listens carefully to what another
partner says, it is possible to avoid conflicts. I think Manoj taught us a very
useful lesson that is we all need to suppress our egos and find a way to get on
well with our loved ones, relatives, friends or just acquaintances. Moreover, I
liked the conclusion too because Manoj managed to make the audience repeat the
main message of his speech.
Support. The speaker used a bright example from his life with marriage. Stories
about conversations with his mother, experience of having hard times and making
a compromise with his beloved woman illustrated the idea he wanted to share
with very well. I suppose the example Manoj described was relatable to everyone
because we all had such difficulties in relationship with people.
Cohesion. I liked that he repeated the main idea of the
performance several times for people to understand the essence of his words. He
thought carefully how to link every part of his speech. Besides, he kept clear
focus through all unifying elements. There
were not moments when I reckoned that something was left unsaid or the topics
were changed too quickly.
Vocal presentation. Honestly, it was quite strange to compare native
English speakers with a person with a strong accent. However, it did not
bother, I could understand everything Manoj said. He was good at articulation
all the sounds, he put the emphasis where it was necessary. However, sometimes
it seemed to me that the pitch he used sounded a little bit weird, as well as
intonation. But I certainly get that it is due to the fact that English is not
his mother tongue and it is ok. As for the tempo, it was alright, it was not
too slow, not too fast.
Physical presentation. Everything was fine including dress and body language
(posture, gesturing, movement etc). Manoj made a constant eye contact with the
public, used many gestures and movements that helped him to look more
persuasive. I especially liked that he walked while he was giving his speech
instead of standing still in one place all the time. By watching the way the
speaker changed his facial expressions one can say that he truly believed in
what he was talking about.
Adherence to time requirements. The performance was about 8 minutes and I think it is
just the optimal time for giving speeches of that kind. Manoj has got good time
management skills, therefore he told everything that was important, he neither prolonged
his speech nor made it too short.
Creativity. To my mind, this speaker was unique not only because
he was a foreigner, but also because he combined laughter with real problems
that we all normally face in life. Not every person can make fun of stories
from his own experience, expose personal stuff and look vulnerable in front of a
lot of people. I suppose only the strongest are able to do that. I want to
believe that Manoj got through the majority of those who watched his
performance.
To make a conclusion, I
would like to say that it was interesting to watch all of the performances of
three contestants. They were all so inspiring in terms of standards of public
speaking, all of them can be considered as ideal orators.
Who did you like most of all
and why? Share your opinions about the contest in the comments down below,
please!
It is a great opportunity to see your opinion about toastmasters 2017! My winner is Manoj and you liked Kevin's performance, and I can see why!
ОтветитьУдалитьThe way you described his performance made me re-watch his performance once more (and it is so touching). Thank you so much for this!
It is a brilliant post! Looking forward to your next one!
Hello! I like Kevin's speech more, but I see your point, this speech has a lot of advantages too! Let's hope we will be such great speakers one day
ОтветитьУдалитьI also think that all of the contestants are very close and it is sometimes hard to decide how to rate them because all of them are so talented!
ОтветитьУдалитьToday I've re-watched the performances and Manoj is my winner 100% but I can see why people like Simon's or Kevin's performance more. And it's so great to get to know different opinions!